January 15, 2006


  • blackberry brambles (the uninterrupted version)

    so it's one of these days again
    when sky is grey, but sun is persistant
    makes it unusually warm.
    angel rays like shards of what we can't have

    caress.

    like the bittersweet wind against dead leaves
    that should long ago have fallen
    from tangled branches of approaching spring.
    dapples of orange light blind me

    dance.

    the time progression of decay
    of plant matter now wet, brown, and squishy.
    the melting snow reveals secrets
    that were once buried deep within a heart

    sting.

    like thistle trodden on by these bare feet
    one must make this muddy journey
    though they cut deep, these blackberry brambles
    surrounding the path before me

    rebirth.

    all my seed pods have gone to waste
    they lie unopened in the place i left
    for this voyage i am taking
    out of this darkness and into Her light.

    as
    a wannabe poet i have to inform you that the beats in the verses go: 8,
    10, 8, 10 and the next 10, 8, 10, 8, then reverse again.  because you
    wouldn't appreciate it unless you knew.  and god damnit i want people
    to appreciate it.

Comments (8)

  • 8s and 10s I see. In high-falootin' poetry journals they call that triamblic dentameter. But thats only after removing a 10 and a 7.5 from the Hungarian and Chinese judges respectively.

  • lol, steve. you are rediculous.

    hey, i did something poet-esque totally on accident... maybe it was meant to be.

    unless you just pulled that out of your ass, which wouldnt be surprising...

    what else do you have in there? hmm? :)

  • Come

    Be blessed in your quest for Peace and Truth

    SeeK

    FinD

    For you shall know the Truth...and the Truth shall set you free

  • amen.

    FUCKSHITDAMNASSCUNTFUCKBITCHASS ok,that's better.

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  • but i like being harassed.

    plus. it's not like this one's being malicious.

  • FUCKSHITDAMNASSCUNTFUCKBITCHASS?  ::blinks::  Well, i know i am, but what's your excuse?  ::innocently looks around while peeling an orange::

    Pan-a-rama-ding-dong

  • "FUCKSHITDAMNASSCUNTFUCKBITCHASS?"  huh. Well, i know i am, but what's your excuse?  ::blinkblink, innocently looking around while peeling an orange::

    Pan

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