January 15, 2006
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blackberry brambles (the uninterrupted version)so it's one of these days again
when sky is grey, but sun is persistant
makes it unusually warm.
angel rays like shards of what we can't havecaress.
like the bittersweet wind against dead leaves
that should long ago have fallen
from tangled branches of approaching spring.
dapples of orange light blind medance.
the time progression of decay
of plant matter now wet, brown, and squishy.
the melting snow reveals secrets
that were once buried deep within a heartsting.
like thistle trodden on by these bare feet
one must make this muddy journey
though they cut deep, these blackberry brambles
surrounding the path before merebirth.
all my seed pods have gone to waste
they lie unopened in the place i left
for this voyage i am taking
out of this darkness and into Her light.as
a wannabe poet i have to inform you that the beats in the verses go: 8,
10, 8, 10 and the next 10, 8, 10, 8, then reverse again. because you
wouldn't appreciate it unless you knew. and god damnit i want people
to appreciate it.
Comments (8)
8s and 10s I see. In high-falootin' poetry journals they call that triamblic dentameter. But thats only after removing a 10 and a 7.5 from the Hungarian and Chinese judges respectively.
lol, steve. you are rediculous.
hey, i did something poet-esque totally on accident... maybe it was meant to be.
unless you just pulled that out of your ass, which wouldnt be surprising...
what else do you have in there? hmm?
Come
Be blessed in your quest for Peace and Truth
SeeK
FinD
For you shall know the Truth...and the Truth shall set you free
amen.
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